Torch of Midnight page 1

A little project I've been working on for awhile now. Being in the field training 24/7 has made it very very difficult but it's a start.

This is basically an experiment testing out ideas for characters, story telling, and designs maybe it will maybe not. This one focuses on a very small Aeskhari as he tries to hide while gripped by his crippling fear of the dark.

I'd really appreciate as much feedback as possible to know what aspects are working and what isn't.

Please enjoy the first page!

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